Thursday 27 January 2011

Rough Cut Feedback

   Front Cover

                     Likes                                                                                        Dislikes

- Colour scheme                                                                                     - Empty at top
- Photo/text font                                                                                    - Brightness of photo
- Layout/colour scheme                                                                         - Title
- Photo/bottom banner                                                                           - Darken Image
- Use of 3 colours                                                                                  - More professional font
- Colour scheme/photo                                                                           - Some text is hard to read
- Photo                                                                                                 - Sizes of separation lines
- Positioning of image                                                                            - Banner at top?
- Font                                                                                                   - Faces are too light
- Lines sectioning off headings                                                                - Some text can't be seen
- Bottom banner                                                                                    - Black text is hard to read
- Photo arrangement
- Clean style


                                                                      Contents Page

                     Likes                                                                                       Dislikes

- Big page numbers                                                                               - Over powering 
- Grid layout                                                                                         - Left image is to dark
- Photos                                                                                               - Confusing
- Organised                                                                                          - Structure
- Images                                                                                               - Brighter image
- Use of lines                                                                                        - Magazine at top?
- Colours                                                                                              - 'Extra' text should be serif
- Positioning                                                                                         - More text
- Live pictures                                                                                       - To many fonts                    
- Colour Scheme                                                                                   - Spellings
- Contents heading                                                                                - Other features are hard to read
- Photos                                                                                               - Use other fonts?
- Page numbers



                                                                 Double Page Spread
               
                       Likes                                                                                             Dislikes

- Like album in corner                                                                            - More text to right of page
- Fading image                                                                                      - Title is hard to read
- Red boxes                                                                                          - Could use more professional font
- Trees coming through title                                                                    - Matt(right) could have been closer in
- Layout                                                                                                - Text blends in to trees
- Image                                                                                                 - Quote could be bigger
- Quote                                                                                                 - 'Heart of Gold' in different font
- Album at top                                                                                       - Title can't be read easily
- Title                                                                                                    - Text going over photo
- Good text                                                                                            - Tidy up columns 
- Like the 'Newcomers' at top                                                                  - Title needs work
- Professional CD cover                                                                          - Check language
- Twigs coming through text                                                                   
- Image fades out
- Use of colour in text
- Good bits at bottom

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